“You’re just sad.”
“Suck it up.”
And the worst?
“Get over it.”
I’m not just sad. I suffer from depression
Waiting for happiness’s resurrection.
I can’t just forget it, it’s in me for good
I can’t do the things that I know I should.
I’m not just sad. I’m broken. I’m lost.
I’ve tried everything to fix it, no matter the cost.
I’ve carried a blade just to hold to my wrist.
I’ve carried a dream inside of my fist.
I’ve talked about it, like they say I should do
But all my efforts are stopped by ignorant people like you.
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The Edges of this World are blurring
The veil of mist thickens and shroud my sight
The Light closes in
The cold abates
I became warm inside
The doubt is gone, the fear erased
No Fighting words, no frightend scream
Then comes the Shadow,
warm and caressing
brings soft darkness with its hands
I care not
I fear not
What they would say
All my troubles are from yesterday
My body stays here bit I will not delay,
In this world I shall not stay
Fire burning in the demons eyes,
A cold murder under the veils of night,
Cast among the throes,
Of a sadists life.
Ties you to a table,
Draws a knife,
Unreal, As a fable,
Pain through the night.
He cackles and grins,
Spurts and he sins,
Finds pleasure in your pain,
As he ignites a flame.
A white hot poker,
A brand on skin,
A sadistic joker,
A sadistic sin.
Left in the basement,
Leather straps cutting your skin,
There is no replacement,
For the hole left by this sin.
In the cold, dark,
Drip, drip, drip of a water pipe,
In the cold, dark,
Slip, slip, slip to the afterlife.
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Favourite Movies
"The Devil Inside", "The Exorcist", "Scary Movie 2"
Favourite TV Shows
"The Boondocks", "South Park", "The Office," "Criminal Minds"
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Disturbed and System of a Down
Favourite Books
"The Taking", "Carrie", "It", "From the Corner of His Eye"
Favourite Writers
Dean Koontz and Stephen King
Favourite Games
"Jade Empire", "Bloodrayne 2", "GTA: San Andreas", "GTA: Vice City"